‘No Straight Lines in Nature’
My poem ‘No Straight Lines in Nature‘ was sucked into the space time vortex π and re-emerged twice for breath.
Well it took nearly three years but the poem was accepted for publication in the Divan Poetry Journal in 2010 (sent in November 2009), has finally seen the light of day in Edition 8 of Divan Poetry Journal!
I had given up hope of hearing from the editors of Divan and had an edited version of the poem (and new title) published in Verity La – you may remember.
The Divan Poetry Journal Issue 8 has suffered numerous delays according to Editor, Dr Earl Livings at Boxhill Institute of TAFE (including State government cuts to the TAFE system and software issues).
Never mind.
It’s here now and you can pop over and read the first version of the poem here.
I originally wrote the poem for Paul Squires (who often waxed lyrical about the non-linear nature of time) and it seems appropriate that the poem has been on such a convoluted trip to publication (and note the poem was published in Divan on the 26th of July – so close to the anniversary of his death on the 28th of July).
My bio is so out of date – haha – well I sent it in 2009 π
2009! That’s quite some lead time…
Yes, three years! Well, at least there was an end result – often you get no response at all (which I think is the height of rudeness in this day and age of email) π
Congrats btw π
Thanks Geoffrey π
Congratulations. Better late than….etc. etc. etc.
Thanks Chartreuse π
One query re Box Hill version: Line that includes ‘dingy’ – should that be ‘dinghy’?
yes, well spotted – I have emailed for them to change it (but not holding my breath π )
Yayay they did fix it – very good!
wow, that;s great. divan is divine, and the poem is stunning! fabulous links too !
thanks tipota – only wish McPaulus was here to see where the poem travelled (he loved it when I wrote it and knew I wrote it for him) – well, you can travel back in time and see for yourself – haha – https://gabriellebryden.wordpress.com/2009/11/10/no-straight-lines-in-nature/
Congratulations, Gabrielle.
Thanks Martin π
Maybe in about….3 years or so ,when I have more linear time I will come by and congratulate you, who knows????
Wonderful poem!
hahaha – you did comment back in 2009 (in your previous life) I recall π so that’s even weirder in a way!
Another of your poems that I really enjoy – congrats, Gabe. I was asked by a phd student in whose research I am participating about the non-linear aspect of time spent on digital networks but I find I can’t really think of time in anything other than linear terms – there’s never enough of it, no matter how I perceive it!
hahaha – no, never enough time bluebee – but time travel in the blogosphere is not that hard to understand – if you are still blogging in a few years time I will take you aboard my blogging TARDIS π woohoo – I am like an elephant who has an excellent long term memory – haha
I look forward to the adventure π
Congrats!
Thanks Charles π
Gabrielle, I can see why they published it. It was an amazing piece. Reminded me of a flute sonata I used to play, all angles and unexpected directions. Something which will have to go on my fridge for a while to read and re-read.
What a lovely comment Kate (5/5 and a gold medal π as it is the Olympics . Having a poem on the fridge is the greatest compliment for me.
Time hasn’t taken the edge off this one at all Gabe! Congrats!!!
The theme of volume 8 of Divan was mutant, which seems appropriate given the poem mutated twice – thanks Graham
Congratulations! Going to take a look at it now.
Thanks Tilly π
sometimes good works need long time to blossom.
\or sth like that ;).
better late than never, i know that feeling, waiting for a publication that said ‘yes’ and then collapse. glad you had a god ending
Yes, it’s happened to me a couple of times – not a good feeling – thanks Dhyan
not a good feeling is the poet-trying-to-be-published understatement of the decade Gabe..
Congratulations Gabe! And I’m glad Verity La managed to get in first. Thanks for the link, by the way.
You’re welcome Nigel π
It does seem appropriate it had such a convoluted journey. It got there in the end as it should. Congratulations, Gabe. I am so pleased for you!
Very appropriate – haha – thanks Selma π
Congratulations! And what a fine tribute to Paul also — and the non-linearity worked its way into the publication process. The Cosmos is complicated …
To hard for us humans to work out, that’s for sure Aletha – thank you my dear π