opaque winter fog
obscures our morning view,
the sun defiant
I am an Australian poet, writer, blogger, psychologist, wife, mother of two children, autism and environmental advocate, and mad animal lover
haiga, there is more to haiku than meets the eye, winter haiku about the fog
June 29, 2015 at 12:15 am
we have asummer days like that, sometimes…!
June 29, 2015 at 10:10 am
our winter days are probably a bit like your summer days Juliet!
July 5, 2015 at 2:56 pm
Nice eerie photo and haiku to match. The sun is a looming ghost.
July 6, 2015 at 8:17 am
wish I’d had your sentence for my haiku ‘the sun is a looming ghost’ hahaha would have been perfect
the mist obscures
the sun looms like a ghost
we go back to bed 😉
Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:
You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )
Connecting to %s
Notify me of new comments via email.
Notify me of new posts via email.
Comments are always appreciated. They are to a blogger like coins to a busker. Come and join in a conversation.
Obtain permission before using a poem in any form.
Articles in the Autism Files can be distributed freely.
email: gbryden at bigpond dot com
The National Library of Australia has selected this blog to be archived in the National Bibliographic Database.
Blog at WordPress.com.